WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop countdown to get some food veges and beef. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll barbie and a soft toy teddy bear. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items and a pair of shoes converse. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block rainbow paddle pop Lucky me!

Cyber Smart Consequences Map

Today  we were learning how to write positive things to negative things here's an example.Look at the top.
There are something that are positive like e.g. Tell the teacher that they know your password. Plus a out come like this Or they might sign you in to Facebook or they might sign you up on anything.

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From Jahleena

Explain Everything

This week in Flox Class we have been using our 5 timetable. On our maths book and we choose a maths problem from our maths book. Then we did our problem on the iPad.

Rugby World Cup 4 Sentence Recount

WALT recount an event in just 4 Sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup, because the All black won!!!!