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Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Wednesday, 23 November 2016

Rotoroa

Kia ora, In scott class I went with my class to Rotoroa Island, Today I was writing about my trip. Here is my writing and a Presentation.

Downtown in Auckland


Beep Beep, The noise that comes form the alarm. “Wake up Jahleena” Said nana. I walk in to the kitchen had breakfast,  mum woke up and made Mine and her salad and sandwiches she also prepared our fruits. Well she was doing that I went and got changed. When she was done I put   the stuff in my bag. I also checked if there were some pest in my bag, and also checked what I had to do from the list. My mum got ready too.

I got in to the car with all my things we drove to school. We got to school I saw Cicilia outside waiting for her dad. I got out of the car and told my mum I’m going to go in side with Cicilia in the hall we saw Auysh and Simione. They where talking they didn’t even see us. Then we saw other people come when it was seven a clock. Every body came in Miss Campbell told us how much food you need she said if you had lots then you don’t have to have some food and if you have had one thing you have to eat something she said i’ll make some toast for yous she said it to every body.

The bus is hear said Mr Linottot. We all got on the bus the man that said that every body has to sit on a chair. Three people had to sit on a chair that was meant for two. We got of the bus and stopped at the cloud because it was close.


We all walked to the ferry station. There where three people that take care of the Island. They told use to check if there are any pest….




Thank you for reading and looking at my blog post.

Wednesday, 15 June 2016

Super Sentences

Kia ora,
In Scott class we have been do our writing and it was about super sentences. I had a lanu and we worked on this. Here is a link to her blog if you want to see by the way here is our writing.

Create tasks

Kia ora,
In scott class we did our Create tasks. And it was about tears of the albatross. Here is my writing.

Thursday, 26 November 2015

WALT use precise nouns to add detail for our reader.

This week in writing we have been using precise nouns to make our writing more specific for the reader.

We took a paragraph and changed the nouns from general nouns to precise nouns.

Here is an example.

In the weekend I had to do lots of shopping with my Mum. We went to the shop countdown to get some food veges and beef. We also went to look for a present for my cousin’s birthday. I had to choose between a doll barbie and a soft toy teddy bear. After that we went to the shop to buy some clothes, I got two new items and a pair of shoes converse. Because I had been so good, mum took me to the shop to buy an ice block rainbow paddle pop Lucky me!

Tuesday, 3 November 2015

Rugby World Cup 4 Sentence Recount

WALT recount an event in just 4 Sentences.

Yesterday we wrote a recount about the rugby world cup, because the All black won!!!!

Tuesday, 21 July 2015

My Writing Learning Goals


This term I am going to work on two of my writing goals.

My goals are:
  • Include some of the important features from the ‘text type’ checklist.
  • Include describing words in my writing.

 I  will know I have achieved these goals when I can show evidence to the teacher.

Monday, 25 May 2015

Information report about Saturn

Take a photo of your plan using an ipad and insert it here.


Success Criteria
Clear categories with subtitles
Self
LB
Use questions to hook the reader in the introduction

Use sentences and paragraphs

Use facts to inform the reader

Use different sentence starters

Use VCOP



Start writing here…

Saturn

Introduction
Have you ever wonder about Saturn?Well now is the time to I am going to be writing this information report about the awesome Saturn.

 
Size
Saturn is the second largest planet in our Solar System and is another gas giant. Saturn is a very light planet.

Appearance
Saturn has a smell rocky core covered with liquid gas. The rings are made up of millions of ice crystals, some as big as houses and other small as specks of dust.